jayne harris

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Knocking Me Down - Poem by jayne harris

knocking me down

i call you on your phone
i dont get an answer
so i walk up to your home
i peered through your window
you were with somebody else
i watched you for a while
i could see the compassion in you
as you looked into her eyes
you cheated once before
should of known by the last lies
so i walked up to your door

just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
i hit the ground
just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
i turn around
just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
i hit the ground
just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
i turn around


INSTRUMENTAL

just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
i hit the ground
just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
iturn around
just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
i hit the ground
just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
i turn around

INSTRUMENTAL

Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss

Form: Bop


Poet's Notes about The Poem

the story is in the lyrics

Comments about Knocking Me Down by jayne harris

  • Jazib Kamalvi (7/23/2017 5:52:00 AM)


    A nice poetic imagination, Jayne. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • Jayne Harris (5/7/2017 4:29:00 PM)


    Thankyou your comment means a lot x (Report) Reply

  • Tony Hoss (5/7/2017 5:55:00 AM)


    great, really has a story in itself, super! (Report) Reply

  • Sekharan Pookkat (5/6/2015 12:02:00 AM)


    An unanswered call is an avoided call (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 5, 2015



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