Knocking Me Down Poem by jayne harris

Knocking Me Down

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knocking me down

i call you on your phone
i dont get an answer
so i walk up to your home
i peered through your window
you were with somebody else
i watched you for a while
i could see the compassion in you
as you looked into her eyes
you cheated once before
should of known by the last lies
so i walked up to your door

just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
i hit the ground
just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
i turn around
just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
i hit the ground
just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
i turn around


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just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
i hit the ground
just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
iturn around
just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
i hit the ground
just as im on the up up up up
you keep on knocking me down down down
i turn around

INSTRUMENTAL

Thursday, March 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the story is in the lyrics
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 23 July 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Jayne. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Jayne Harris 07 May 2017

Thankyou your comment means a lot x

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Tony Hoss 07 May 2017

great, really has a story in itself, super!

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Sekharan Pookkat 06 May 2015

An unanswered call is an avoided call

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