Kolkata Burning Comments

Very nice

Dear Dr Bhattacharyay, Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem 'kolkata burning'. Its a pen- picture of the incident drawn by very few words that connotes more than the eyes meet. In the middle of the poem two lines 'fire was here fire was there' remind me of Coleridge's line from the rhyme of the ancient mariner. nicely done. Last four lines convey the message very quitely. A 10 FROM ME.. Please read my poems recently posted 'a wish' and 'an inferno' Rajkumar

Recent fire disaster in Kolkata a dolt stupe…inertia of the personnel…and costs about 30 lives…when Disaster –Managements will be shake off their 'secondless' phlegmatic…mindset…? I pity them…and register my deep felt grief to the family who faced the bereavement …Will Kolkata Corporation kindly turn ‘effective-ear’ to my call …its Ms. Nivedita..Who was a formerly a Kolkata goer…in her academic pursuit… Thanks Kaku for such a heart-bashing poem… 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

Well thought out, and well written.