Michelle Tiddy

Rookie (28/10/70 / Staffordshire, England)

Lack Of Faith - Poem by Michelle Tiddy

A simple case of lack of faith
When you should really have enthused..
And love me and trusted me
Because I am your muse

But you didn't, quite obviously
You chose to choose another's words
Well, then hell, what am I
Who am I to argue?

Nothing, but a wilting flower
And that stream that has no-where to go
Undulating, not crystal clear
Muddied with false hope.

Comments about Lack Of Faith by Michelle Tiddy

  • (3/21/2007 1:20:00 AM)

    Not so Em, you are as lovely as a Perfect Rose....C'est Magnifique, yet again, so open and full of heart and soul.........(avongal) marci :) xo (Report)Reply

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (3/20/2007 12:15:00 PM)

    Sadly Beautiful, my dear...Vivid image paints a captive picture...Solid Write.

    ~ F.J.R. ~

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  • (3/20/2007 5:38:00 AM)

    I sense you are a gentle flower and hope the mud won't stick, Love David, nice poem. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 20, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, February 4, 2011

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