Judged Poem by Michelle Tiddy

Judged

Rating: 5.0


Slugs and snails and puppy dogs tails
Vanilla smiles and strawberry pails
Lots of faces laughing at me
Is it malice, in their eyes I see?

Feeling like a lamb to the slaughter
I climb the steps to the alter.
Of life where I am judged
By those who don't know me

Stirring, twirling, the cauldron claims
All my youth, my heart, my veins
On a stage where the audience hides
Cruelly taunting with vicious jibes

Feeling immeasurably lost and stupid
What more could I expect from myself
The tendrils of smoke rise from the pot
And engulf me until I melt

But my saving potion will surely be
Rising, thundering, right out of me!
For I may be silly and naive, but never ever
A crumbling child on their knees

Tuesday, March 27, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: dogs
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marci Made 27 March 2007

Well the strength and indomitable spirit of you shines in this piece, Em crumble, absolutely never.....This is fascinating sweetie. marci.xo

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Declan McHenry 27 March 2007

An intriguing piece Michelle.

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David Taylor 27 March 2007

Dignity, strength and poetry, you should be triumphant! love from David

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Michelle Tiddy

Michelle Tiddy

Staffordshire, England
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