Monday, November 23, 2009

Lands Unknown Comments

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I became a land of astonishment when I was young,
Mocked at, jeered at, my lingering breath bent my back.
Survival lacked enemies, bit by snakes I scaled my better life,
My names heard for longer than the animals, I was fugitive.
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Naveed Akram
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Catrina Heart 23 November 2009

wonderful poem shared....strong and powerful diction used well...........great! ! !

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Naveed Akram

Naveed Akram

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