Lanes Of Friendship Poem by Cherry Sha

Lanes Of Friendship



Often you block the storm

that few emotions cause,

When blackness of your heart,

surpasses the night,

You lost your beliefs

and you want to cry..

When people enrage you

and you cannot mollify..

Look up to me sweetheart…..

I will listen, I will say..

I am your best friend

I will find out the way…



Like you never give me a thing

Which has always been mine

You never enlighten me

If the things with you are fine..

I want to know the grounds

not barely the incidents,

come up with words 'coz

I will listen, I will say..

I am your best friend

I will find out the way…



Our relation is like a wine..

Older it gets, it shud be more fine.

Dnt consider me the world…

Just be mine all the way..

Let me guard you through tuff moments

Let me touch your rage..

I will listen, I will say

I am your best friend

I will find out the way…



Remember I am the one

Who has grown up with you..

Love, laughter, cries, fights,

I have felt all in you,

And Like a sweet doll,

have seen small fatty you,

Give me all the hush-hush

Which..u keep in your spirit..

Give me all the particles,

That grow out like a tumor

I will do some magic,

I wont let them enter your hearts gate…

I will listen, I will say

I am your best friend

I will find out the way…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 13 November 2008

Cherry u hve a nice way with words. But I wish to suggest two things; rather pass them on what I learned from my seniors: Poetry must touch the subject in general and be ready to relate to any reader; secondly be brief. U will become a very very good poet

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rohit sapra 07 November 2008

This poem is great as it reflects true essence of true friendship.

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C. P. Sharma 01 November 2008

you have the poetic passion and poise. keep it up my friend.

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