Last Gypsy Church Of Buddha, Indiana Poem by David Kowalczyk

Last Gypsy Church Of Buddha, Indiana

Rating: 4.7


Tears falling from a weeping willow,
virgins ascending through the clouds.


Sighs from the night's last moonbeam,
monkeys whistling through your mind.


Panthers licking blood from the wind,
homeless angels landing on your nose.


A tickling of your heart,
butterflies sailing from your soul.


The sound of one eye winking.

Thursday, December 20, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: clouds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Mywords 04 January 2008

The ending is perfect. Absolutely perfect. In fact, it rescues an otherwise somewhat mediocre poem.

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Justin Case 04 January 2008

I liked it up until the last line. Just a tad too cute, a trifle too clever, for its own good.

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David Kowalczyk

David Kowalczyk

Batavia, New York
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