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As If I Am Your Dream

Rating: 4.7
Here, in the warm white fog,
our smiles contain miracles,
miracles only an ancient love
could ever manifest.

My blood turns to wine.
The edges of shadow harden.
Time fills with tears.
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Francie Lynch 24 November 2015
Nicely done. Where do we separate our fantasy from reality, and which do we prefer to live in. In the realm of the Romantics with this piece.
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Rajnish Manga 24 November 2015
There is a marked element of mysticism here, which coupled with a string of beautiful words casts a spell on the reader. I quote a few lines: Time fills with tears /...Let us surrender / the sky we stole / from the gods.
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M Asim Nehal 24 November 2015
Confession and repentance nicely written.
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Anil Kumar Panda 24 November 2015
Nice poem with a strong message. Loved it.
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Neran Sati 24 November 2015
Let us surrender the sky we stole from the gods. So wise, so true, so beautifull!
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Ratnakar Mandlik 24 November 2015
Let us surrender The sky we stole from the God. Fantastic imagery and very excellent diction. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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Shah Surja 24 November 2015
'My blood turns to wine.'
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June Cleaver 31 August 2009
Yours is a truly beautiful soul, David.
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Linda Ori 05 January 2008
My kind of poem, David - short, but packed with powerful imagery and perspective. Linda :)
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Mark Mywords 04 January 2008
Truly inspired work. Don't be in a hurry to give that sky back...
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