David Kowalczyk

Rookie (11-22-1952 / Batavia, New York)

As If I Am Your Dream - Poem by David Kowalczyk

Here, in the warm white fog,
our smiles contain miracles,
miracles only an ancient love
could ever manifest.

My blood turns to wine.
The edges of shadow harden.
Time fills with tears.

Let us surrender
the sky we stole
from the gods.

Comments about As If I Am Your Dream by David Kowalczyk

  • Francis Lynch (11/24/2015 1:44:00 PM)

    Nicely done. Where do we separate our fantasy from reality, and which do we prefer to live in. In the realm of the Romantics with this piece. (Report) Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (11/24/2015 11:59:00 AM)

    There is a marked element of mysticism here, which coupled with a string of beautiful words casts a spell on the reader. I quote a few lines: Time fills with tears /...Let us surrender / the sky we stole / from the gods. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/24/2015 11:48:00 AM)

    Confession and repentance nicely written. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (11/24/2015 11:22:00 AM)

    Nice poem with a strong message. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • (11/24/2015 11:13:00 AM)

    Let us surrender
    the sky we stole
    from the gods.

    So wise, so true, so beautifull!
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  • (11/24/2015 6:16:00 AM)

    Let us surrender
    The sky
    we stole from the God.
    Fantastic imagery and very excellent diction. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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  • Shah Surja (11/24/2015 4:36:00 AM)

    'My blood turns to wine.' (Report) Reply

  • (8/31/2009 10:15:00 AM)

    Yours is a truly beautiful soul, David. (Report) Reply

  • Linda Ori (1/5/2008 11:37:00 AM)

    My kind of poem, David - short, but packed with powerful imagery and perspective.
    Linda :)
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  • (1/4/2008 1:21:00 PM)

    Truly inspired work. Don't be in a hurry to give that sky back... (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2008 11:59:00 AM)

    Marvelous work. Thank you, David. (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2007 12:38:00 PM)

    Nice write David! Thanks for sharing! *10*!
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  • (12/26/2007 12:30:00 PM)

    beautiful imagery, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 26, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 3, 2011

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