Friday, December 14, 2007

Lattice Of The Window Comments

Rating: 5.0

the promises she makes as when I am saddened
as when smacked by the pain in sorrows
as reasoned by remorse yet with reek of shadow
she simply descends with healing touch on me.
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Dr subhendu kar
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Meena Mustafa 30 June 2012

Lovely! enjoyed reading :)

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Ewigi Liebe 17 December 2007

Wanting to capture the essence of a time of passion in an open meadow. And the continuing nature of love, the progression of feelings as well as the building of relationship. The nature of time counted as moon travel.

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Thad Wilk 14 December 2007

Very good write Dr Kar! A pleasure to read. *10*! Thad

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