Laughing Girl Poem by Raphael Amorous Cead
Laughing Girl
</>To the girl I don’t even know
You smiling face in this dark day
The way you walk proud and free
Your spirit has impacted this poet’s soul
The glide of your motion to and fro
You had a gentle happiness about you
The people around you could feel it
You knew we all could see the joy
To the girl I don’t even know.
I am dissapointed. This poem is scanty and weak. Its too abstract and there are some grammatical errors in the text which messes up the entire flow. It could have been better. I kinda see where you were going with it but its not finished. Maybe if it were longer and more alive then it would be more pleasant to read. I believe I have wasted my time reading a poem that has no point written by a writer who has no feeling in what he has written. If this is the best that can come from a creative mind then what has the world come to? But I am just one person and there are many interpretations on a poem. Others could actually like this meager poem. Sorry for my bluntness but I give it a 2.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 12:55:55 AM # 1.0.0.1119
very sweet poem, nice to have a person like that every now and then, just to put a smile on your heart: 0)