Law Of Attraction Poem by Keith Horton

Law Of Attraction

Rating: 5.0


Had there never been a day
that I surveyed your smile,
or tasted the scent of roses
sung from your untamed locks;
if I looked, but failed to notice
the timeless possibilities
alive in the depths of your soulful eyes,
or if in haste, I missed
the perfect placement of your mouth
on your sun-kissed Taino face,
or passed the chance to bathe
in the mist of your breath,
floating free on waves of bliss;
If the day had never come
when I sampled your embrace,
warmed by the realization
of how perfectly you fit,
I would have known you still
as a child of my dreams
and I would have found you

for the universe is awesome!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Deeks 22 March 2012

Impeccable and mature write on love and adoration. Call me soppy but I actually got a bit tearful reading this as it's so full of real raw emotion.so many writes just waffle from a distance of persistently rambling and mentioning how much they love thee, this is so much more personal and honest.. Top score top piece. If my man wrote this of me I'd be skipping for weeks.., bravo it's lovely. Karen

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