Tuesday, January 5, 2010

Learning About Love. Comments

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When I was very young
I was hard set
On falling in love with anyone
I could forget
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Zack Holland
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 05 January 2010

Wonderful! Very creative, flowing, content in unity, and a prolific last line that completes the poem superbly! The refreshing simplicity and appropriate word choice also makes this poem excellent. 10++++

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