Wednesday, November 12, 2014

Left In The Lurch Comments

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Left in the lurch
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Everything I touch crumbles
Even smile breaks her tenderness
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Salini Nair 14 November 2014

As if the sun is faithless Fruitless blossoms are falling.......................nice poem with lots of variations...

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Valsa George 12 November 2014

Even when the elements turn hostile and when dear ones fail to understand and reciprocate our love, when life turns dreary at times, it is the abiding faith in God that gives us the strength to wade through the mires of life! Leave everything to His will! I can sense the tinge of pain in these lines and am touched! Great write!

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