Lessons Of Life Poem by Parneet Jaggi

Lessons Of Life

Rating: 4.3


Lessons of life
Perfectly planned
Intricately woven
into a carpet of immaculately neat designs,
One moves its hands
to find each thread
finely fastened into
each other,
Lest humans in the habit of plucking things
indiscriminately
perturb the divine designs.
Destiny so benevolent holds your hands
to walk on the carpet
and check each thread
lying bare
to help recognize
which colour is for you.
The myriad flourescence bedazzles,
But the solo solace
of walking on the carpet is
that someone is holding your hand.

Saturday, December 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 09 December 2017

A sublime creation.. liked the precious concept so beautifully expressed Welcome

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 09 December 2017

This is too good flow of thoughts. Keep up

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Preeti 09 December 2017

Spontaneous yet sublime

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Anamika 10 December 2017

A complex theme well handled. Gives an excellent message of life, depicting the power of the divine

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Amar Singh 10 December 2017

Divinity personified. excellent.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 20 December 2019

Mam, that's why you are the poet of great repute. A philosophical write.

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Amardeep chauhan 24 December 2017

Good nice

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Nirmal chauhan 21 December 2017

Excellent poem

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Gill Ravinder 21 December 2017

Cool definition of What holds water in life

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Sukhvinder Singh 12 December 2017

Smooth n simple directly into the heart 💓

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