Daniel Nairn

Rookie (Bellevue, Nebraska)

Let Her Pass - Poem by Daniel Nairn

Beauty grabs my eyes and keeps them
Reason shouts, my mind objects to
Liking her, to loving her. I
Let her pass, and wait my time, but
Feelings scream 'There is no other! '


Comments about Let Her Pass by Daniel Nairn

  • (5/13/2006 3:43:00 PM)


    This has a lovely oriental quality - a brief, spare image, but a big impact. It leaves the reader to turn the words around, re-experience his own past, then come back again to the words. A fine piece. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/6/2006 10:10:00 PM)


    The heart knows, follow it.Lovely write.

    Patricia
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 6, 2006



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