Lets Be Honest Poem by negar shahnouri

Lets Be Honest

Rating: 5.0


u dont love me, it hurts me, yes
but u still dont show ur tottaly careless
it hurts me, yes.

look in the mirror and ask ur eyes
tell me the truth, i dont need lies
my heart will mend, atleast it tries

kill me once
dont give me another chance
i'll die or i'll forget u after a month

i look in the mirror and to be honest
i dont want u leave me and its the best
thing tht u can do for this
meat that is beating in my chest.

i love u, i need u and u know the rest.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jihad T 17 January 2009

nicw words and the way you expressed is clear and shows how you suffer. the rhyme is so good and fits the meaning. i could feel with each word i had read

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Yasser Koor 11 January 2009

oh oh oh lovely words... dear, look in the mirror and feel what u see, , just don't close ur eyes and u wanna be free, , we have to take the chance to be what we wanna be just let ur spirit free and ur friend will see...

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