Letter From A Friend (Dance Of A Lover) Poem by Adrian Cordova

Letter From A Friend (Dance Of A Lover)



She was mourning when he found her.
A pretty girl of eighteen.
She clutched a later in her hand.
She looked so crushed.
A wilted petal is all she was.
He knelt beside her, took her hand.
She said they were to be wed.
He held her tight and let her cry.
She cried and told him he was dead.
He held her tight and let her cry.
He came to see her every day.
Everyday her eyes grew bright when she saw him come around.
He wooed her well.
Charming and polite he was.
And then one day a storm rolled around.
The forces brought the flower down.
The fragile petal broke again.
He begged her and pleaded her forgive.
She locked the the door and cried, No more!
He came to see her every day.
Eventually her lock fell away.
She opened the door and cried, No more!
She leapt in his arms, armor gone.
He twirled her 'round and kissed her face.
He swore the petal nevermore to break.
He slid a ring on her finger.
And said they were to soon be wed.
On her wedding day she cried from glee.
He held her hand and kissed her sweet.
She looked at him with hopeful eyes.
She looked so happy, unbelieveing of the lies.
She thought it all would soon be well.
Then the next day they found her dead.
Her eyes were closed.
Her face was sweet.
She looked asleep.
Her once smooth nightgown though...
It bloomed red.
Her heart was broken.
No more to beat.
The heat of her body now fled.
The emptiness filled the room.
All was still as she laid to rest.
He was gone. 
As was the ring.
His last words still filled the air.
'Nevermore the petal break.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
loNeLY AnGel 17 May 2010

wow.. this is very sad. but very well written my friend. another amazing poem by you. :)

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Summer Holst 21 April 2010

always impressive! well done!

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Lynn Glover 20 April 2010

The story part of the poem is very confuseing and leads the reader to believe several different things about what is going on. Then, it turns to marriage, then death. A very sad poem. I would like to see your friend write about the trees, nature or something different than sadness and death. then I would give you better input on the overall writing. I know this dosen't help much but there is some possibilities lying within this writer. No one could tell that Robert Frost was a great poet by reading only one of his poems, of course unless it is his poem The Road Not Taken. Your Friend Lynn

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Sherri Coulter 20 April 2010

the title is well done.luv it. she clutched a later.should it not be letter :) the content is nice flow with imagery....but the ending messed with MY brain......is it all lies..always?

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Adrian Cordova 20 April 2010

I'd like for everyone to know that my friend would like to remain under an anonymous identity. Therefore I am obligated to not tell you her name.

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