Thoughtless I am, I've chosen you over all else.
I will burn cities for you.
I would sacrifice my innocence for you.
I will never let you give up.
Runaway with me my love, for the world is dead set on keeping us apart.
I will do everything I can, and everything I cannot do, for you.
And if you are to die, you will die in my arms, and no where else.
And in my burning rage, and immortal love, I will storm the very gates of,
Heaven
Nirvana
Vahalla
Or whatever heaven substiute you have been sent to.
For that is all you deserve, heaven, and nothing less.
And remember as I fall, you are the only reason I rise again, for I am not human, but a beast.
A beast that has been tamed by your beauty, exteral and internal.
For Olette and Alie
very beautiful :) it touched my heart. its full of emotion and is very deep. i loved it :) well done :)
I loved it, it had an the air of an old time romance, kinda reminded me of Romeo & Juliet...10!
So very beautiful. Well penned and very deserving of being chosen. Congrats!
Lovely poem. Can be interpreted on many levels. It's great with intensity of emotions.
There is such a word as RUNAWAY, but it is a noun. Here you should have used two words: RUN AWAY. Congratulations on having this poem selected as Member Poem of the Day!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow... this is really deep, full of emotion and i love it! def. a 10.