Wednesday, June 27, 2018

Letter To My Hair Comments

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I first noticed you when I was about three. My friends mom carved and twisted you into rows punctuated with tinfoil and beads that was the first time I learned you could swing. I loved you then.

Until grandma tried to get me pretty for church and you would not cooperate so we grazed you up and branded you with a hot iron comb. You fought and you hissed and finally submitted. You laid down, you let us have our way with you. You decided to bend and curl as we instructed you and I felt sorry for you and maybe you felt sorry for me too.
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Khalid Saifullah 22 July 2018

Loving you is teaching me to love that little girl and the grown woman she grew up to be. I am watching you grow and as you grow, I do too. You remind me every day that we are both beautiful. Nice and thoughtful.

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Chinedu Dike 27 June 2018

Really an insightful piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Amena and do remain enriched.

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