Sunday, July 5, 2009

Letting Go Comments

Rating: 2.8

So there you are, all dressed and pressed -
emotions in a box.
I seek the lid to put to rest
the ticking of those clocks.
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Dan Brown
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that was kinda sad to me. and i can't really give or tell you what to do. all i can say is to tell you what i think you should do. if it was me i'll take the one i love. and tell him what i think and feel. give it one more chance. and if nothing happens. and he's still the same. then thats when i'll pack my bags and leave. but that's just me. and i'm sorry i'm not much of a help to you. but i'll give your poem 9 outta 10. good job. by: crystal sonier age: 15

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Bob Gibson 05 July 2009

A very heartfelt and emotional poem Dan I'm sorry i can't answer your question! how do i let her go?

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