DAVID GERARDINO

Rookie (9/19/1963)

Life,1

Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

when the light hit the wire,
the wire became a fist.
when the wire became a fist,
the wire had to go.
when the wire had to go,
the fist lost its grip.
when the fist lost its grip,
the grip lost its soul.

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Comments about Life,1 by DAVID GERARDINO

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjrFrank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/6/2006 6:40:00 AM)

    DAVID...QUITE IMMAGINATIVE...YOUR MIND IS IN PERPETUAL PROCESSING
    MODE FOR UNIQUE VERBAGE....TIGHT MIND=TIGHT WORK=10!(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 29, 2004