Life Poem by Jason Duddington

Life

Rating: 5.0


No matter the obstacles that face me.
I will climb to the top for all to see.

I fight with my feet I fight with my fists.
I fight with my body no matter the risks.

You can push me till I'm weak, you can shove me till I cant speak,
but I will not quit as long as my heart still beats.

I may be knocked down and I may be choking, but I will continue to breathe for my spirit is not broken.

I will continue to fight and last a lot longer for my will to survive is much stronger.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 16 June 2011

I liked it. Great poem written very well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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