Life Poem by Irma Maciel

Life

Rating: 5.0


Life is harsh and cruel
Filled with disappointment and tears,
But why is that
Can't it change.

Life can be happy
Only for a second,
But the second is not going to last
Just like life.

Isn't there something that can make us happy?
Probably but what?
Some say it's love
But is that really true?

Can love bring you happiness or sadness?
It might be both,
But what's the point
Of getting in love?

You don't know when you are going to fall in love
But when you do
Your nightmare begins
The only thing you can do
Is wait.
Wait for what?
For life to end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 04 November 2012

WELCOME to the Poetry World dear Irma! This your first poem is a clear indication of your Beauty and Talent magically inked! Life, a very thought provoking topic that we all interpret in different ways! You have taken the optimistic way to present your humble approach! Your potential in the Poetry World is clearly shown in this awesome first write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Keep giving more food for thought to the Poetry World! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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