Tuesday, October 16, 2012

Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is harsh and cruel
Filled with disappointment and tears,
But why is that
Can't it change.
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Irma Maciel
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Romeo Della Valle 04 November 2012

WELCOME to the Poetry World dear Irma! This your first poem is a clear indication of your Beauty and Talent magically inked! Life, a very thought provoking topic that we all interpret in different ways! You have taken the optimistic way to present your humble approach! Your potential in the Poetry World is clearly shown in this awesome first write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Keep giving more food for thought to the Poetry World! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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