Life Poem by Jabale Rahmat

Life

Rating: 5.0


Colourful surroundings
Deceived by the black and white soul
Life being an abstract miracle
Passes through all the impossibles
But the end is mark with futility
Where sorrows, miseries, and happiness
Blend together to form a tasteless bittersweet entity
Whispers life is nothing but a blank pit
That can't be fill ever with enough needs

Wednesday, June 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 21 June 2018

Vanity upon vanity that is human life is aptly captured in the poem. An insightful piece of poetry nicely encapsulated in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Work of a sober mind. Thanks for sharing Jabale and do remain enriched.

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