Carter Smith

Life - Poem by Carter Smith

The bitter sweet symphony
in which i reside
the good and the ugly
by which i abide

it's absence is deadly
the silence can kill
while it's voice is exciting
i can't escape the thrill

The suprises good or bad
can sometimes make me sad
or on some special occasion
can make me very glad

some people can live with her
while others, it's more than they can take
it's very very twisted
this special thing called life

Comments about Life by Carter Smith

  • (7/21/2012 1:11:00 PM)

    very nice words describing life as its bad and good; sweet or bitter (Report)Reply

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  • Michael Round (7/21/2012 12:13:00 PM)

    This is quite good. I am uncomfortable with lower case i in any place. Because there is sosme punctuation I do not like avoiding the rest of punctuation rules. Whilst you can get away with in such a genre of license it can be off-putting for some readers. Hope more comes from you... but try to gon up a level. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 21, 2012

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