Life Poem by Ali Joanne

Life



Life is like a merry-go-round
Tossing you up and down
Sometimes you cant touch the ground
But in the end it all comes around

When friends and family cant hear
and your problems need to be said
Write them in your diary that has an ear
And your problems will leave your head

If you need someone shout out and be heard
As help wont be that far away
All you gotta do is say that one word
And help will be there to stay

In life you do make mistakes
But not all of them need to be known
All you need is some mates
And your true qualities are shown

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 24 August 2009

I whole heartedly agree Ali. I have been saying this for decades, and all ppl tell me is 'yeah sure'. But if we need help with a problem and we talk to someone we can trust whether it be a friend or a family member, then we feel more at ease. Like last night I got a real shock. I found out that when I had a minor heart attack and was in the ER, my youngest sister was going to actually drive here to be with me. She told my family here that she wants to be kept up on my condition. This shocked me, because I was told that she wanted nothing to do with me. But my heart is resting easier today because I found out that at least.... one.... of my sisters really cares. Your poem made me think of that talk we had yesterday about that. Thank you for this wonderful poem of wisdom that everybody should actually take to heart, and practice. A 10+++++ Also thank you for your very kind comments on my poems too.: -) Love & hugs, Barbara

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