Life Is A Prison Poem by Victoria Golden

Life Is A Prison

Rating: 5.0


Life is a prison,
Oh God let me out.
No one to listen,
To hear when you shout.

Climb the walls of insanity,
Ride the waves of despair.
If you fall it don't matter,
There's no one to care.

Used to wish for a window,
To see birds, trees and sky,
But you're better without one -
Stops you aiming too high.

Watching freedom is painful,
For those locked away.
Seeing joy, love and happiness,
Another price that you pay.

Strong is good, weak is bad.
Be it false, be it true.
Your mind makes the choice,
And enforces it too.

Cell walls built by society,
With rules to adhere.
If you breach the acceptable,
You had better beware.

Hide the pain, carry on,
Routine is the key.
Don't let on that you're not,
What you're pretending to be.

Lock it all up inside you,
How badly that bodes.
Look out for that one day,
When it all just explodes.

Leaving naught but a shell,
Base functionality too.
But killing all else,
That was uniquely you.

So how do you grow,
With a timebomb inside?
Or how to defuse it,
Without destroying its ride?

You can't.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adi Cox 27 October 2009

I like this poem. You really seem to be saying something here. The way I read it is that you seem to be soul searching trying to find a way forward in a life that is constrained by rules and regulations and trying to navigate a future with no clear direction. I too am an inmate doing a life constrained by society. I have found solace in creative writing. It has set my imagination free. This is my escape and I can relate to this poem. Excellent writing 10/10.

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. . 26 October 2009

BRILLIANT PIECE VICTORIA! ! ! ! ! ! ! :)

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