Life Is A Race Poem by Nitesh K. mahlawat

Life Is A Race



We all want to do something
But not sure about goal
Thant's why we can do nothing
Perhaps we don't know our soul
Set your goal and try to achieve
Only good results you would receive
First of all fix your aim
And then work hard for the same
What is necessary? Positive thinking
let your heart never be sinking
In adverse situation, if you face
Never forget life is a race
Have patience and try again
What you've lost, you'll regain
As a student our work is to read
Fruitful reading is like a seed
That will give fruit and shade
In your future you'll be upgrade
Education will give you name and fame
Your life is like a frame
In which your picture will be set
What you want you'll get
So hurry up never be late, IF NOT
You'll find closed, the gate of your fate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cornell Sandifer 21 December 2013

i like your poem you should alway tell a story or provoke a thought and you did. may i suggest, put punctuation in your poems so you can control how the reader reads your poem and may i say the poem always comes first at end of yours you seemed more worried about rhyme to me. i look forward to reading more of your poems.

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