i like your poem you should alway tell a story or provoke a thought and you did. may i suggest, put punctuation in your poems so you can control how the reader reads your poem and may i say the poem always comes first at end of yours you seemed more worried about rhyme to me. i look forward to reading more of your poems.
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i like your poem you should alway tell a story or provoke a thought and you did. may i suggest, put punctuation in your poems so you can control how the reader reads your poem and may i say the poem always comes first at end of yours you seemed more worried about rhyme to me. i look forward to reading more of your poems.