Friday, December 20, 2013

Life Is A Race Comments

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We all want to do something
But not sure about goal
Thant's why we can do nothing
Perhaps we don't know our soul
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Nitesh K. mahlawat
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Cornell Sandifer 21 December 2013

i like your poem you should alway tell a story or provoke a thought and you did. may i suggest, put punctuation in your poems so you can control how the reader reads your poem and may i say the poem always comes first at end of yours you seemed more worried about rhyme to me. i look forward to reading more of your poems.

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