Edwin Tanguma
Los Angeles
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Life Is Rough When One Is Over The Hill (Italian Sonnet)

Life Is Rough When One Is Over The Hill (Italian Sonnet)

My love for you burns hotter than a flame
A flame which not even water may quench
If life were not so cruel you’d be my wench
Yet it's cruelty of destiny to blame

When I say I love you I feel no shame
To those who threaten me I will not flinch
And if they torture me I will not wince
I will gain strength when I holler your name
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Sunday, September 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: silly
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It may not be one of the greatest sonnets ever written... hehehe But it is a sonnet... Isn't it? ? ? Lol
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COMMENTS
Kim Barney 06 September 2015
Yes, it is a sonnet, and it's certainly not the worst one ever written; in fact I think it is very good. Correct number of lines, good rhyme scheme. Well done.
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