Saturday, July 11, 2015

Life Together Comments

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She cleans the floor.
(I clean the ceiling.)
She washes dishes.
(I clean my plate.)
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Steven Shoemaker
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G. Akanji Olaniyi 31 December 2015

The ironic ending of this poem makes it suspenseful! That is more reason it is a great poem! ! !

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Chinedu Dike 19 July 2015

Living together entails building bridges that unite and not barriers that divide by two people with different orientation, but with common denominator, that is love. Cementing areas of compatibility and overlooking areas of differences. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned with insight. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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