iron panda 23

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Lifeless Memories - Poem by iron panda 23

You made me feel like Im on the edge of that mountain waitin to take that fall
I cant find that desire
to even admire the love that we use to share
It was you and me plus the sun- it was shining
and the night stars would shine so clear....

As I watch time pass me by
I wonder if I could have,
still fill it with adventure
Because with you things are
and were never the same
Its like you aim to be the blame
like you wanna feel a certain pain
To be...ashamed-?

You make me feel like Im on the edge of that mountain waitin to take that fall
I cant find that desire
to even admire the love that we use to share
It was you and me plus the sun- it was shining
and the night stars would shine so clear....

And so I stare into what are now
My lifeless memories

~IP23


Comments about Lifeless Memories by iron panda 23

  • (3/19/2010 4:55:00 AM)


    I'm loving everything about this poem. From the title to your last line, and all of the imagery in between.

    Izzey Strange
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  • (3/10/2010 5:29:00 AM)


    'Lifeless memories' the title itself appeals to our sense of imagination... it shows that these memories do not mean anything to the writer. i'm still to know why it is your favourite poem? ? ? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 25, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 24, 2010


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