Like Many Others Poem by Jacob Stretton

Like Many Others

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Like Many others
Like many others
I fear loss
Like many others
I fear for my mother
Like many others
I fear for my brother
Simply, because I care, such a loss would be a night mare.
Leaving many in despair.
Perhaps many are not aware, of the great loss that will confront them.
Like many others
I would struggle to bare, part of the upcoming loss.
Beware, sadly every body departs.
Like all the others.

Friday, July 26, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: brother,despair,fear,loss
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is one of the poems I'm doing for a school project, I'm in year 7. please give me some suggestions, I need advice, not criticism.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lulu Montey 26 July 2013

Jacob this is a lovely Poem. You seem like a lovely boy and who will make good choices in life... I've met you before and hope to see you again. In regards Lulu x

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