Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,407 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

Shadow By Reality - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Here is the semblance flapping in wind
Light when parades by shadow of wing
grace looks brighter by glaze of green
eyes seems to meander into love intoned

desire settles slowly over quest cajoled
heart riffles faster by grin in verdure
wave nestles on crest and trough in cadence
rungs of ocean bestirs stemming tide

reasons of truth unravel mysteries
time precision dissipates the illusion.....
darkness slowly bespeckles to dew
sun knocks door of mist genuflecting

Topic(s) of this poem: shadow

Form: Blank Verse


Comments about Shadow By Reality by Dr subhendu kar

  • Debarshi Bhattacharya (6/18/2017 6:41:00 AM)


    a profound poem with much wisdom! Loved it. (Report) Reply

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  • Elena Sandu (10/22/2016 12:07:00 AM)


    Lovely to see this poem chosen for the first page, thank you for sharing, I find great depths to your verses, appreciate every word, loved these lines time precision dissipates the illusion.....
    darkness slowly bespeckles to dew
    sun knocks door of mist genuflecting. Great coincidence or maybe a moment of serendipity, who could know, right before reading this poem posted one about the rising sun.
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    Dr.subhendu Kar Dr.subhendu Kar (10/24/2016 4:50:00 PM)

    Thank you dear Elena for your heartfelt comment, yet i do not have words to express my gratitude. quite inspiring to know your poetic vision.

  • (10/21/2016 10:39:00 PM)


    Desire settles slowly over quest cajoled
    Nice conceptualization. Congrats on the member Poem of the Day.
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    Dr.subhendu Kar Dr.subhendu Kar (10/24/2016 4:51:00 PM)

    Thank you dear Ratnakar ji for kind comment and appreciation.

  • Pintu Mahakul (10/21/2016 10:13:00 PM)

    Nice one
    Darkness holds illusion and mind easily does not understand mystery. Reasons of truth are unraveled. But by glaze of green light appears and grace looks brighter. Very interesting this poem is really and nice one.10 (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (10/21/2016 8:26:00 PM)

    What a nice piece!
    Congrats for being selected for the day..... (Report) Reply

  • Dipankar Sadhukhan (10/21/2016 3:19:00 PM)


    Beautiful write... congratulations... (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (10/21/2016 1:57:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem emphasizing the need for objectivity in life. Congratulations and thanks for sharing, Dr. Subhendu.
    reasons of truth unravel mysteries
    time precision dissipates the illusion.....
    sun knocks door of mist genuflecting
    (Report) Reply

    Dr.subhendu Kar Dr.subhendu Kar (10/21/2016 1:59:00 PM)

    Thanks for your heartfelt comment,

  • Bharati Nayak (10/21/2016 3:27:00 AM)


    Congratulations for Poem of the Day.A beautiful poem, loved reading. (Report) Reply

    Dr.subhendu Kar Dr.subhendu Kar (10/21/2016 1:53:00 PM)

    Thank you dear Bharatiji for your kind appreciation,

  • (10/21/2016 3:05:00 AM)


    Congrats on poem of the day my friend. i love it. (Report) Reply

  • (10/21/2016 2:08:00 AM)


    Well written and played out poem (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (10/21/2016 1:51:00 AM)


    This is wonderful poetry. desire settles slowly over quest cajoled
    heart riffles faster by grin in verdure' is so nice. Congrats.
    (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/21/2016 1:22:00 AM)


    Congratulation dear Dr. Kar sir for the poem of the day. Went through your poem'Shadow by Reality' I assumed it as marvellous poem with thrilling expression. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/21/2016 1:06:00 AM)

    Semblance
    Of mist genuflecting! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (10/21/2016 12:33:00 AM)

    Shadow By Reality
    Congrats on poem of the day. Your poem is entitled Shadows By Reality. To be candid I found this poem hard to understand. It is marked in that light.

    Robert
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  • Asis Biswas (7/27/2016 6:04:00 AM)


    semblance or outer appearance of light and shadow on green leaves of trees provides the ultimate thrill to poet subendu.yes that indeed the thing to watch and feel.so that the real reason of mysteries reveal in real.fine poem (Report) Reply

  • Nilima Deb (6/30/2016 11:30:00 AM)


    nice poem.each darkness is the cause of passionate light...delightful write. (Report) Reply

  • Sophy Chen (11/21/2015 7:37:00 PM)


    A good poem and thanks for showing Sir,

    Sophy
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/9/2015 6:42:00 PM)


    truth always prevails
    as darkness fails
    sun flashes out gloom
    there is always space or room
    (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (7/27/2015 2:32:00 AM)


    I found this poem soothing to the soul, yes I like it very much..... (Report) Reply

  • (1/19/2010 7:51:00 PM)


    I loved the first part of the poem it's like calming to me (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, July 10, 2017


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