Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,730 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

! ! ! Wild Stream By The Eternity! ! ! - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Rune of passion when holds the mystery
sympathy never dries empty by the reeks
eloquence of love parades across the bliss
the reason never seems to falter by the belief

trust still reels through the hidden dream
gleaming the pearl of blue emblazoned
walks follows the path true by repentance
enlightened by warmth as leaf rejoices in green

silence yet blazes the mystery of love in hide
moon still whispers the heart by the grin deep
hope mingles into the blue when emancipated
world wordless smiles faster by the redemption

yet the hours of the dark and light as all we need
clouds smacks of rain as the path of deliverance
love yet never follows foot prints of narrow endings
desire meanders into the wild streams by the eternity


Comments about ! ! ! Wild Stream By The Eternity! ! ! by Dr subhendu kar

  • Bharati NayakBharati Nayak (11/25/2015 6:47:00 PM)

    Love that Wild Stream By The Eternity- - - Love is eternal____Love never follows foot prints of narrow endings.It is unselfish- -It fills the heart with unending hope and bliss.Thanks for sharing the wonderful piece of poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Clarence PrinceClarence Prince (7/17/2015 1:19:00 PM)

    Silence mystery, love, redemption, emancipated, deliverance, and eternity!
    Those are all glorious words of hope, into this poem, along with others!
    Well done, Dr Subhendu!
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  • Michelle Kafka (8/15/2009 6:16:00 PM)

    A deep moving poem with excellent word choices. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (11/14/2008 10:57:00 PM)

    Wild sream of eternity,
    consisting of joy and serenity,
    Full of alluring charm,
    carries the world in it's arm.
    Hit
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  • Cecil Hickman (10/26/2008 9:21:00 PM)

    beautifully written with depth of feelings and emotions very well penned, , graet write in poetry, , , blessings...Cecil (Report)Reply

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  • Onkgopotse (OnkgopotSir) Ramatiti (10/14/2008 2:58:00 AM)

    Well... at the risk of plagiarism, I say the work was thought out with a great deal of eloquence. And if narrow endings are anything to go by, I'm hooked! Leave it at that, Doc! (Report)Reply

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  • Alexander Hale (10/5/2008 11:52:00 AM)

    'Trust still reels through the hidden dream'. Amazing. I'm jealous, your writing is breathtaking. This poem is way more than a 10. (Report)Reply

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  • Nimal Dunuhinga (10/5/2008 11:38:00 AM)

    This seems to be your Masterpiece Doctor and the wild stream flows ever like the warm blood in veins. 'Sympathy never dries empty by the reeks.' (Report)Reply

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  • Moushumi moushumi (10/3/2008 9:52:00 AM)

    A streaming sensation i feel when i read yours. How could you be so artistic in using words? sometimes i feel jealous of ur ability. This poem we can call it a true piece of 'magical realism'. I request u to read GARCIA MARQUEZ. Then i could share some treasure about that. (Report)Reply

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  • Heather Barrett (10/2/2008 1:34:00 PM)

    Thats a great poem i would love for you to read some of my entry and give me some pointers you have done a really great job i give you a 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Albina Barkhudaryan (9/28/2008 1:25:00 AM)

    Your words are a work of art...I would love to hear your opinion about my style of poetry... (Report)Reply

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  • ~*Darkness Falls*~ (9/24/2008 2:30:00 PM)

    that was an awsome poem you deserve a 10.... (Report)Reply

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  • Lonnie Hicks (9/23/2008 12:45:00 PM)

    Humm
    This is avery different kind of poetry and at first seem unfamiliar to me. But imagistically I loved the color and the capacity to make the reader pay attention to every word. It is poetry, in my view which makes the reader look behind the curtain to discover the gems there.
    Great work.
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  • Anand Dixit (9/23/2008 1:46:00 AM)

    I loved it. I have given a 10. (Report)Reply

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  • Jay P. Narain (9/22/2008 11:18:00 PM)

    Dr. Kar, I love your poems. I am glad to see that we have great poets like you from India. (Report)Reply

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  • Cilene Farrell (9/22/2008 10:47:00 PM)

    Lovely imagery, great choice of words to express the mood of the poem, I like it! (Report)Reply

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  • Layla Joseph (9/22/2008 7:18:00 PM)

    this poem is really colourful it really speaks to the heart nice one (Report)Reply

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  • Nun Ya Bizness (9/21/2008 4:33:00 PM)

    trust still reels through the hidden dream

    beautiful line and beautiful poem. Kudos
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  • Sarvesh Kulkarni (9/16/2008 6:27:00 AM)

    This is out of the world. I honestly feel unworthy of commenting on this. All I can say is thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • Mimi MataMimi Mata (9/14/2008 1:34:00 AM)

    Dr Subhendu,
    A soul mate love, a connection with eternal emotion and spirit that will always find a way to redeem solidity...Precisely done with passion...

    Read With Appreciation and Gratitude,
    Mimi C Mata
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, August 15, 2008


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