Thursday, November 19, 2015

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Morning opens the door
Of the darkened earth,
Darkened by yesterday's misteries.
Sweet rays slowly open my eyes,
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Teddy Wirunda
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Shakil Ahmed 19 November 2015

your beginning is beautiful. you have painted your passions very well in the poem, thanks for sharing.,

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