I thought I would live forever, like Newton or Shakespeare-
Until you were gone I realized you were my life’s elixir,
I tore your heart to pieces yet it is mine that is torn-
Numbed, suffocated, mutilated, annihilated-
The petals to my heart do not bloom anymore,
I turn back the hands of time on my watch-
Earth did not turn back for me,
All women turn right when I turn left,
Whatever they see cannot be less than the truth,
No one believes I have changed-I cried love too many times,
I am between history and forgotten, dust and ash-
I am dead-not officially; death is taking too long to pick me up.
your limbo... you totally expressed what you feel... its great... great words... are you male or female. Dou you have something like friendster
This is an amazing poem! I like how well the words just flow, and how you seem to tell a story with the poem. Very well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
like it loads! good stuff.