Isunge Mwangase

My Heart Crashed With The Loudest Din

My heart crashed with the loudest din,
Loving you is the greatest sin,
Because the wages of it is my death,
You made my soul leave the earth,
Only now I see the stage clear,
Your heart has always been its bier,
I crack with such a pain,
Like a land that has never had rain,
But I will go without a fight
For your happiness is my might.

Poem Submitted: Monday, October 10, 2011
Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 12, 2011

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  • Lenore Lee (10/12/2011 6:48:00 PM)

    This has a good rhythm and truth: lovers only care that their loved one is happy, their own happiness is second to their lover's.

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  • Vipins PuthooranVipins Puthooran (10/12/2011 2:59:00 PM)

    Wow, I like the rhyme and flow of this poem, , , written so well and it's a great poem...

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (10/12/2011 12:55:00 PM)

    I think this is a beautiful piece of poetry! !

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