Isunge Mwangase

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My Heart Crashed With The Loudest Din - Poem by Isunge Mwangase

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My heart crashed with the loudest din,
Loving you is the greatest sin,
Because the wages of it is my death,
You made my soul leave the earth,
Only now I see the stage clear,
Your heart has always been its bier,
I crack with such a pain,
Like a land that has never had rain,
But I will go without a fight
For your happiness is my might.


Comments about My Heart Crashed With The Loudest Din by Isunge Mwangase

  • (10/12/2011 6:48:00 PM)


    This has a good rhythm and truth: lovers only care that their loved one is happy, their own happiness is second to their lover's. (Report) Reply

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  • Vipins Puthooran (10/12/2011 2:59:00 PM)


    Wow, I like the rhyme and flow of this poem, , , written so well and it's a great poem... (Report) Reply

  • (10/12/2011 12:55:00 PM)


    I think this is a beautiful piece of poetry! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 10, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 12, 2011


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