Lime Again Poem by Trevor McLeod

Lime Again

Rating: 5.0


I found her beautiful on the inside
And honored her for time
When all along my feelings changed
and now she's beautiful on lime

But then it changed to something more
and she would disappoint
My life a fool; she was not cool
and I could now disjoint

Wednesday, January 26, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: lostlove,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Lost love due to disappointment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 January 2022

A fine appealing poem, wonder why you lost her if she was beautiful on the inside. Thumbs up for the muse. Plz do read and comment on my newsest poem too titled, 'The ravishing rain'

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