Tuesday, July 5, 2016

Limerick Pg13 #1 Comments

Rating: 5.0

I met this cute girl in an urban dwelling
At a stall full of food that she was selling
And then I leaned in,
I placed my hand on her chin
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Ishaan Kapoor
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Rips Dasss 10 July 2016

Great

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Kelly Kurt 05 July 2016

A great limerick, Ishaan. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 05 July 2016

Actually I was enjoying what I presumed to be a lovely romanic narrative, but suddenly in the end I recoiled in utter disgust. A delicious blend of two conflicting emotions, well articulated and elegantly penned in good rhyme scheme with insight. Beautiful depiction of the offensive nature of body odour which makes the bearer a social outcast. Thanks for sharing Ishaan. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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