Saturday, October 13, 2007

Lines I Traced Comments

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You liked it when I traced the lines
first those that spread away,
from luscious lips to molar territory,
then goose bumps rose at once
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Francesca Johnson 13 October 2007

A poem of reflection and latent maturity. Much enjoyed, Herbert. Love, Fran xx

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