Little Girl Poem by Bac Phong

Little Girl



That girl in the hill
blowing dandelion seeds.
What's her secret wish?

Thursday, August 13, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: girl
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jacqui Thewless 29 August 2009

This is lovely, though I'd prefer 'on' the hill to 'in'.

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