Tuesday, January 20, 2015

Little Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

Little girl sitting in a big man's world
big men
sick men
filthy men
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Janine Louw
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Michael Walkerjohn 25 January 2015

Aloha Janine... Welcome aboard my fellow bard... a pretty good place to post and store... and seek a higher rapport with word working wrights and more... life and the experiences one makes it through seem quite sordid for the mess of US... being one who does this for entertainment... getting in the messy muddle of humanity and all that implies... whatever... My thoughts are there too... with you as you continue to travel, in what ways that your travel... and my thoughts are more than travelling these daze... I have heard that, Silence is Golden, an untruth perhaps? However, personal experiences do the better bard make... and should this be the cast, IAM really interesting in those experiences which you will share to the all of US and too the Universe... really! ... And those closing lines... not true atall... There are those Big Girls that make up their own rules too... Lovely Facial... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two (read me)

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Fabrizio Frosini 23 January 2015

thanks for sharing your poem, Janine. It is a poem on lost innocence, a painful poem that gives voice to too many children humiliated and sexually abused.. A poem on depravation.. the one of those who take the innocence out of those little girls..

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