Little Miss Broken
Sits off to the side
Knowing no boundaries
Knowing no pride
She used to know
Such a long time ago
But now all she does
Is sits
Off to the side
Hoping to die
What a pathetic fate!
For one who was
So bright and so wise
She used to run around the gardens
Used to swim beneath the trees
Thought thoughts about her gods
Thought thoughts about her life
But now all she does
Is sit
Off to the side
Counting away her days
Until she finally dies
She'd given up to quick
Choosing instead
Something that made her nothing
She doesn't wish to cry her tears
She doesn't wish to scream her fears
All she does
Is sits
Off to the side
Hoping and wishing
That she will die.
A/N: Constructive criticism is always loved.
I love you, little miss broken. I just hope for your sake you can be fixed.
I think this poem is pretty good. Keep writing and I can't wait to read more of yours.
hi...sam its urv first...and its very goood....much pent up, pain and anguish a bit malencholy and sad....to the darker side...but great lines so cheeers and ten welcome to the club....enjoy participate and feel free to commment on my work too
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
samantha, ur poems are LOVELY.i think u're a wonderful poet. u should really make more