Monday, November 10, 2008

Little Things... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lay in bed..
Thinkin bout the time,
when I woke up to a call..
with her voice,
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Dislocated Heart
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Allysyn Bryant 10 November 2008

funny how it's the little things you miss most of all....like the sound of someone's voice....nice poem.

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Caroline Weeks 10 November 2008

This is subtly, mutedly beautiful...moving. Your screename is Dislocated Heart, though I believe it is in just the right place.10 ++ Caroline

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