Sunday, May 2, 2010

Live For Someone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Keep me near you in this dream,
As close as the strands of your hair
Kissing your bare shoulders in the summertime.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Like the variable rhyme scheme...It works well with this mellifluously structured piece ~FjR~

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Will Barber 05 May 2010

A gorgeous flow of words and sentiment. Top-notch love song, full of truth and meaning. - Will

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