Sunday, June 29, 2008

Living Someone Elses Nightmare Comments

Rating: 5.0

when she sighs and takes
a breath
and takes the money
for the sex
...
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Maxwell B Anderson
Sex
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Tanya Stanford 26 August 2008

What a horrible life for her to have to live. One just thinks of them as tramps but sadly what has led them to have to do that to make money. Motion of the poem allows the reader to feel the anxiety and anger. Well done

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 August 2008

someone in some places is unfortunate to shoulder the burden of 'carry on the dirty works' but at the end of the day, who cares.'survival' is no longer a taboo, but a nessessities.the sky's not always bright.hey maxwell, u certainly got the touch mate.keep in touch!

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Maxwell B Anderson

Maxwell B Anderson

Auburn N.S.W. Australia
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