Friday, July 4, 2008

Loneliness Comments

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No one around, yet myself,
my thoughts spread all through out,
as there is nothing keeping them in.
My desolate soul just floats helplessly.
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Javier Falcon
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Ershad Mazumder 06 July 2008

I am happy to see you use words like soul, eternity. Really a very good piece.

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May Namoc 04 July 2008

i agree, ur poem is very nice. emo, but nice. deep and...gawsh, it makes me wanna rush over there and give you a superduper gigantic hug! ^_^ lol. u know u have me. love, may!

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

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