No one around, yet myself,
my thoughts spread all through out,
as there is nothing keeping them in.
My desolate soul just floats helplessly.
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i agree, ur poem is very nice. emo, but nice. deep and...gawsh, it makes me wanna rush over there and give you a superduper gigantic hug! ^_^ lol. u know u have me. love, may!
I am happy to see you use words like soul, eternity. Really a very good piece.