Loneliness Poem by Hamid Moghaddasi

Loneliness

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If you feel, you're at a gloomy prison
Your breath coming out so hard
The full sensation of suffocation
When you make sense
you're in the deep grave
and tons of soil bestrew over you
and are being buried alive
When you feel
to commit suicide
you rush out in a grim temper
named loneliness
The darkness spreader
The shadow of death
The begotten of ugly love
The child of
Pain and the soul;
The son of
Ulcers and the heart

Loneliness
Wednesday, May 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Osazee Dankaro 17 May 2017

Hello Hamid, please check out my poem Lonesome Sleep. Your poem needs plenty of work if you ask me, as you have not really hit on your subject Loneliness.

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